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so this is just a quickie sketch im turning into my last painting for the semester, i dont usually like posting WIPs but i just need advise in whether or not i need to add anything.
her hair is going to be more accentuated and abundant, and im going to add a hint of her body as well as lower her left eye a bit but otherwise thats all i have planned
any ideas or suggestions?

*i know it needs more refining and 'work' and shading, just a reminder this is an unfinished sketch, an outline, not something that's in anyway a finish product
*also, the body is supposed to be disproportionate. long neck, tiny shoulders, big head are NOT going to be changed

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:iconhatake-ayumi:
I see it PERFECT! :star: I loveeee bloood :heart: The expression is amazing!

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:iconvespertin:
I really like it simply the way it is now...but then I'm a sucker for minimalism with a dash of color =P

Can't wait to see the finished product.

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:iconshamanj:
Looks good. The only thing that stood out as weird to me is the blood splatter on the bridge of the nose. Its just the way that it is on the top and the side without any kind of depth to it, makes it look sort of flat. Im talking about the one that is closer down near the nostrils in the .\ shape.

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Wow.
This is so good!
I think it'll be really cool if you added like a Lolita dress or how ever much of the body you're going to show.
And maybe for her hair do maybe ringlet curls?
because japanese lolitas look so cute and sweet but then theirs blood on her face so its like woaahhh! and maybe even blood splatters on the dress!
that'd be trippy!
XD

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:iconma-ja:
*W* i-love-it

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:iconlapaniquetendre:
вау о_О

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:iconxcitizenxerasedx:
sweet !

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:iconartgeek707:
I think you should limit the color scheme to red and various shades of white and gray.

It looks great so far though.

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:icongooddevil1989:
put a bit more shadow under her nose to show a light source.

if you want though.

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awesome!

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